An archive of the Section 7-7 and 7-8 classblog at the International School of Beijing - 2013-14
Great poem! But maybe it should be longer.
I think this poem is very poetic and deep. I think Seth could make lots of other good poems like this one.
haiku's aren't supposed to be long
awesome poem
Great Haiku Seth!Your poem depicts a Thunder strike very creatively, and I love your creativeness.
Cool Haiku! Interesting topic!
The vocabulary used in your haiku makes it really interesting. I think your haiku describes thunder nicely. Cool! :)
it's short and powerful! the descriptions of the thunder is really cool :)
Great poem! But maybe it should be longer.
ReplyDeleteI think this poem is very poetic and deep. I think Seth could make lots of other good poems like this one.
ReplyDeletehaiku's aren't supposed to be long
ReplyDeleteawesome poem
ReplyDeleteGreat Haiku Seth!
ReplyDeleteYour poem depicts a Thunder strike very creatively, and I love your creativeness.
Cool Haiku! Interesting topic!
ReplyDeleteThe vocabulary used in your haiku makes it really interesting. I think your haiku describes thunder nicely. Cool! :)
ReplyDeleteit's short and powerful! the descriptions of the thunder is really cool :)
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