Oh what a joy it is,
to have a friend like you.
For giving me strength,
the way you do.
For lifting me up like an elevator,
when I’m feeling down.
Putting a smile on my face,
when I’m wearing a frown.
Thanks for being there,
and helping me grow.
Your friendship means a lot,
and I’d like you to know.
Sweet poem Sunny! While the sentiment feels heartfelt, I also really like your commitment to meter and rhyme scheme. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem, not only does it rhyme but it also has a great meaning. this poem is so sweet and nice. I have nothing bad to say about it and I don't have any critical comments to give. :) :)
ReplyDeleteThis poem is so cute!! I like how your's rhymes.
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