Tuesday, April 22, 2014

Breaching by Eric and Curtis

16 comments:

  1. I'm sorry guys but I think this video can be improved. You did great showing the word with a large font in the beginning of your video, but you did not show the definition of the word so it was hard to understand. And also you did not explain your example on how it showed the meaning of Breach.

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  2. Okay....I like how you showed the meaning but I agree with what Sunny said.. this could be improved. You guys were on the right track but the meaning could easily be interpreted as something else. Good effort though :)

    -Gauri 7-7

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  3. I think the video was quite simple and effective. You had difficulties finding a way to get in the stall, so you breached it by using the stall next to it as leverage to get over to the other stall. Maybe a definition could have been a better use for the video, but otherwise the video was quite cool.

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  4. This video was very good overall. You could've improved the video with some dialogue, music and the definition of Breach. Good Effort.

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  5. This is a good video. If the video contained the definition of "breach" and if you had lines to say during the video to help portray the meaning of "breach", I think the word would have been easier to understand. Good job! :P

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  6. I think it would be hard to understand if you didn't know the meaning of the word "breach", but I think it was simple and humorous. It might help if you had the definition written in words.

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  7. this video was pretty good, although i think you could'fe made the defination better

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  8. I think this is a good video, but I still don't quite get what the word breaching means. Maybe you guys should add a definition at the end.

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  9. ERIC SPELLED MY NAME WRONG IN THE VIDEO!!!!!!!!!!

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  10. I did not really word's meaning from the video and there was no definition which made it difficult to understand. You had a good idea, but you just have to improve it.

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  11. This video is good, but could be improved a lot. It isn't really clear in terms of showing the audience what the word means. The video was a little hard to process, and the video could have matched the word better if you pretended to knock down the door or something. I think that although it was a little unclear, I still got the main idea. Good job!

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  12. hmmm... this is really good. But the way it describes the definition is not clear. You could have shown the definition of the word. Then the viewers might understand more. Good job.

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  13. This video explains breached well and at the same time is fun to watch. But like the others said, this could be mistaken for another word, otherwise good job!

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  14. I can i understand what you are trying to say there, but i think that it would be better if you added the definition of the word and added music

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  15. The video does explain breached pretty well, but I think you could have improved it by writing a definition for it to show the people that don't understand.

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  16. It's nice how you acted our physically, but I can't really get the meaning... It could be a bit more improved to clarify you definition :)

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