This is a great picture to represent paraffin! If you were to change anything, I would suggest that you only include paraffin covered candy in the background pictures. I know the definition says paraffin covers candy, but not all candy. You really did a nice job with the definition, it helped me understand the word better, but maybe you should put the words in another colour that is easier to read.
I love how your picture has a variety of different candies. The poster is very colorful, cheery and bright. I also like your border and the way you made your pictures different sizes.
This is a great picture to represent paraffin! If you were to change anything, I would suggest that you only include paraffin covered candy in the background pictures. I know the definition says paraffin covers candy, but not all candy. You really did a nice job with the definition, it helped me understand the word better, but maybe you should put the words in another colour that is easier to read.
ReplyDeleteNice job! I like the colourfulness of your poster. As Leah mentioned, it would improve the poster if you wrote the definition in another color.
ReplyDeleteI love how your picture has a variety of different candies. The poster is very colorful, cheery and bright. I also like your border and the way you made your pictures different sizes.
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